【导语】“哈拿”通过精心收集，向本站投稿了8篇如何写好托福写作例子，下面是小编整理后的如何写好托福写作例子，欢迎大家阅读借鉴，并有积极分享。
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篇1：托福写作例子
1. People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you?
2. Some people trust their first impressions about a person s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with?
3. A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country?
4. How do movies or television influence people s behavior?
5. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
6. It has recently been announced that a new movie theater (a shopping center/ a new restaurant/ a new high school) may be built in your neighborhood.
7. A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory?
8 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
9. Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land?
10. Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved.
11. When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer?
12. Some people think we should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think we should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with?
13. What is one of the most important decisions you have made? Why was this decision important?
14 In general, people are living longer now. How will this change affect society?
15 We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)?
16. In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea?
17. A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why?
18. When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions?
19. People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why?
20. Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries?
21. Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy-computers or books?
22. If you could know something about the future, what would you choose to know about and why?
23 People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people?
24. Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents generation?
25. You want to persuade someone to study your native language. What reasons would you give?
26 You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park that you have visited. This might be a city park, a regional park, or a national park. What improvements would you make? Why?
27. If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why?
28. There are many different kinds of advertising (on the radio, on television, in newspapers in magazines, and on billboards). In your opinion, which one of these kinds of advertising is the most effective? Why?
29. Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not?
30. Advertising helps to sell products. Describe the qualities of an effective advertisement.
托福独立写作模板的介绍
首段：
To those who…, it could not appear surprising that
针对KW 展开论述
Thus, for me, nothing is more evident than that + TS总
TV is an indispensable necessity in our life.
l To those who…, it could not appear surprising that( 大家都觉得)
To kids, it could not appear surprising that parents are angels with unconditional love for us.
To people, it could not appear surprising that TV is an indispensable necessity in our life.
l 针对KW 展开论述
For TV can ease us from stress when we are exhausted from work, bring us happiness when friends are coming, more importantly, with the help of TV, we have an easy access to information all over the globe.
l Thus, for me, nothing is more evident than that + TS总
I would like to fill my spare time with the company of a TV.
中间段落(用一般现在时)
l We may with propriety consider that + TS
l , for sake that / for reason that / the reason is that / because
l The story of … would add great weight to my point.
l Just imagine, if it were not for the sake of TV, my sister would fail to be the person/ never be as intelligent as she is now/ the … person she is now.
If sb goes without
If sb fails to
结尾段落(重复首段观点，不要出新观点)
l The case of … happens all the time
l This thought strikes me all the time that if my sister lives her life without TV, maybe her achievement would still haunt her.
l To put another way, I believe, it may sagely be asserted that + TS总
TV would be my first choice in my spare time.
托福独立写作的考试重点
刚开始准备写作容易产生的一个主要误区就是重点放在语言和词汇上。但是实际情况不是如此，托福对语言的要求并不是太高，大家可以去看看OG上面的5分例文，语言很平常，但是它为什么能拿5分?Coherent!就是说文章的句与句、段与段之间的过渡连接很自然，说理一气呵成，没有跳跃和不连贯的感觉，而这点是我们很多中国考生容易忽视的。托福写作虽然不像GRE写作那样对逻辑有很高的要求，但是也一定要写的连贯舒畅。这才是OG对于托福独立写作真正的要求。
那么托福独立写作的考察要点是什么呢?有效回应题目，阐明文章主题;逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开;内容连贯一致;遣词造句的能力。同理，上述的第一点考察的是考生切题的能力;第二点考察的是谋篇布局的能力;第三点考察的是考生逻辑论证的能力，最后一点才是直接考察考生英语语言的能力。任何的英语写作考试都考察了写作能力和英语能力。当我们了解了具体的评分标准之后就可以由易而难先解决写作然后再解决英语部分。
篇2：托福写作例子
1.用词不当
学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
——problems应改为questions
2.拼写错误
这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.
——judgement应改为judgment
3.乱用大词
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题：
1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能连用的;
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
4.表达中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
句子中划线部分的表达过于中式化。
5.表意重复
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。
6.固定用法错误
? To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
——To some extends应改为To some extent
7.例证夸张
For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。
8.成分多余
According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
该句中的shows that是多余的成分。
9.词性混乱
However, the questions such as “Have you ever regretted marrying your husband” may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。
10.时态错误
托福大作文一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态。
Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.
篇3：托福写作如何举好例子
托福写作如何举好例子
在备考托福写作的过程中，不少拿不到写作高分的中国学生遇到的问题不是看不懂题目，也不是想不到理由，甚至也不是写不到300字(有学生写了470字，却只得了fair)，而是不会论证。“不会论证”这四个字几乎就是托福写作的死穴。ETS的考官们在OG中反复强调fully developed的重要性，说的也就是这个理儿。论证的主要方法有直接论证、举例子、引用他人观点和数据等等。在这里，最适合中国学生操作，也是最容易得高分的就是举例子了。
然而，举例子这个方法向来不为中国学生所重视。因为对于大多数学生来说，举例子实在是太容易不过了，只要写上for example之类的提示词，再写上人尽皆知的诸如Einstein, Newton之类的例子就万事大吉了。而事实上，这样的例子考官早已经看过成百上千遍了，怎么可能再给高分呢?
因此，要想举出高分的例子，最好是写两种例子：
1)美国人所熟知的历史、文化的例子，但一定要有一些新意，不是讲烂了的Galileo, Mother Teresa之流
2)讲自己身边的故事。
若是考生能够选用第一种例子，用得恰当的话自然能让考官眼前为之一亮。例如在讨论媒体对人们的影响时，选用美国人所熟知的脱口秀女王Oprah Winfrey作为例子。或是在讨论学生是否都应该学习历史的时候，选用美国历史上知名的总统，如Thomas Jefferson, Herbert Hoover等进行论证都非常好。这样做既进行了有效论证，又不落入俗套。然而，举这类例子对于考生考前的积累要求比较高。如果距离考试还有三个月或以上的时间，我建议考生可以在考前多准备一些类似的人物或事件的例子，以备考试之用。在这里，推荐给大家几个参考的网站：维基百科www.wikipedia.org/，纽约时报 www.nytimes.com/， 华尔街日报 online.wsj.com/ 和 American thinker www.americanthinker.com/ 这些都是很好的收集素材的网站。
对于大多数备考时间比较紧的考生来说，花大量的时间去准备第一种例子显得有些不太划算。因此，性价比比较高的第二种例子更适合于备考时间比较短的考生。托福考试仅仅是语言能力考试，只要能用恰当的例子论述清楚问题就可以，因此用自己或身边人的例子对于考官来说也有很大的说服力。
有的考生仍然会问，那我身边没有那么多的例子可以用怎么办?这个时候，对待ETS的考官就不能这么“死心眼”了，就要学会“编例子”。但是“编例子”也要有技巧，也要让考官信服，绝非信口胡编。在这里介绍三个小技巧，帮助你把例子编得更生动。
1) 加上姓名、时间、地点等
很多中国学生在写例子的时候会使用“比如说有一个人……”这样的表达。这样的表达看起来底气不足，且中式思维严重，很难受到考官青睐。考生完全可以改用另外的表达“我有一个朋友叫Jason，他在两年前做了X.X事……”这样写就看起来舒服多了。在叙述个人类例子的时候，尽量使用具体的人名、地名和时间。这样能使你的例子看上去更丰满、富有细节，也更像真实的事件，有说服力。
2) 与论点结合，写出X.X之前和X.X之后的变化
需要特别注意的是，例子一定是为论证服务的，绝不能脱离主题举例子。有的考生非常心醉于自己编出来的故事，但是却忘了自己在写托福作文，这个故事并不能证明你的观点，那这样的文章得不到高分一点也不奇怪。
这里的X.X指的是论点中的主题词。例如在写机经中的一个题目：公共交通是否应该免费时，有一个分论点是公共交通免费以后，私家车会减少，这样尾气排放得少了，环境也就变好了。这里的主题词就是私家车的数量，例子就可以写成N年前私家车很少，环境很好，然后私家车变多以后，环境就变差了。例子可写成：
10 years ago, in my childhood memory, the city which I live in now is one of the most beautiful cities I have ever seen. The blue sky and the clean water were quite impressive to me. However, 3 years ago, when I came back to this city again, I was astonished by those changes. The city developed rapidly during those days.There are far more private cars than years ago on the road every day. On average, every household has one or two cars. The city may be described as “developed” now,while the sky here is never as clear as ever.
这个例子当中所用的词汇、句型基本都是中学所学过的。但是其中用到了我们刚才所谈的第一个技巧，加上了时间细节，也用到了第二个技巧，扣紧了主题，说明了有私家车变多之前和之后的变化。这个例子看上去文采平实，但却符合托福考试的评分规范，单就这个例子而言，就是可以得到4~5分的高分的(满分5分)。
3) 写完例子以后，一定要再结合论点论证说理
这一点不难理解，却是很多考生所忽视的。再强调一遍，例子的存在是为了更好地论证论点，因此在写完例子以后，需要再加上至少1~2句话重申一下你的论点。例如上文中出现的例子，写完之后，还应再加上If the amount of the cars can be reduced, I believe it will further improve the environment here, and be beneficial to all the citizens here as well. And The free payment of pubic transportation will make this come true.这样就是一个完整的论述段了。
逻辑能力--托福作文的灵魂
托福独立作文重要的因素是什么?当然是论点和论证。一篇好的作文，论点可以提纲挈领，论证可以丰富文章内容。
由于考试时间的限制，很多英语程度好的学生也会出现一些问题。比如说一个学生对作文的论点言之凿凿，但就是写不出东西，或是写不出令自己满意的句子。所以，上考场前，脑中一定要装一些东西，好的例子，好的句子等。
这里强调论据的重要性，不是忽视逻辑和论点的重要性。相反，只要你能够掌握一些的论据，对你谋划全篇的结构，以及段落发展，是有好处的。
论据的准备也可以称为素材，这种素材可以是一个短语，一个人名，或是一个完整的例子。这种例子能够辅佐你的乱点，能够画龙点睛。
把握好新托福写作的思路
怎样发展成为一篇逻辑性很强的文章呢?下面小编为大家介绍一些实战做法。
1.首先应该审题，尤其关注新托福写作题目中的性词汇。
比如：Improving school is most important factor to sucessful development of country. 看到most ，我们自然想到用他因法。
2.其次用20秒的时间，整理脑中所有能用的素材，让这些素材称为支持你段落的骨架，然后开始确定段落的论点。
3.尽量使你的语言句式丰富一些。
形式主语，主动，被动，动名词To do作主语，倒装句，there be，以及强调句等等。特别强调一点，为了使你文章的逻辑清晰可见，要使用逻辑连接词。
4.把握好过渡词的使用，和适当的论述方法完善你的作文，使之成为一个逻辑整体。
论述方法：条件(假设)法，比如：if 我按照论点那样做，就能cause siginificant effects，除了用if，还能有with, when, only through + 方式+倒装等。
托福写作--优先确定它的灵魂
一、托福写作的立意
由此进入破题与立意结合的阶段。充分的破题所积累的大量思维方向给我们以信心，要做的只有一项遴选工序了。而这选并不是闭上眼睛随手挑，而要符合以下条件：
1.要与论题相匹配。
论题问的既然是提高生活质量与否，一些无关紧要的改变就应该弃之不用，比如烹调时间缩短这一项改变，是事实，且未对生活质量有直接明显影响，就应该避免用作主要论点。
2.要能言之有物。
这是再功利不过的一条标准。比如我自己提到了食物准备时间缩短能让人性情改变，破题时觉得不无可能，真落笔时却不知道由何说起，如果选了这一条为一个主要论点，结果是我说了一句话就走人，那还不如选个能下笔，能展示语言功底，也能显示思维缜密的写作方向。
3.选择的无论是2个还是3个论点，内在一定要有联系。
这其实是整个立意阶段的重头。要立意，就是要明白自己表达的对象是什么，明确立场。然后站在这个立场上，挑选支持自己的论点。
托福写作破题结束后，第二要做的重要事项便是整理行文思路。破题过程其实是个发散思维的过程，而立意，则是要把思维收回来，组织化，理清它的脉络纹路，让他们按照自认为有说服力的顺序排列好，准备落于纸上的过程。这个说服力的强弱，应该以什么标准判断呢?
笔者认为，能说服读者的议论，在论点选择上应该遵循一个原则：三个(或者两个)论点不能在层面上有交叉，但要符合一条明线：支持全文观点。而打动读者的论点选择，不仅遵循上面的原则，三个看似不交叉的论点间还有一条暗线贯穿一致。令全文浑然天成，回味无穷。
立意的地一步，按照上面的原则看，当然是先确定观点。以题目为例，笔者愿意选择否，食物易于准备降低了人们的生活质量。步踏出去了。
确定观点后，破题时得到的思维方向，明显不利于我的就应该排除。
比如营养价值改变这一条，虽然速食文化的确对人体有害，但另一项速食：生疏和熟粗粮，就是向有益方向改变的，两者势均力敌，仅管是很容易想到，也很容易举例论证的论点，却不宜使用，因为如此贸然用了，有思维不缜密之嫌。然而，这毕竟是一块好啃的骨头，如果其他论点都不好论证，还可以回头捡起这一条来，隐去健康速食那个事实进行作文，当然，这依然是下下之选。
二、托福写作中需排除异己
之后，便该比较遗留的可能性论点，选取能言之有物且不交叉的项目，作为主要论点了。
托福写作考试发散思维时，思维如洪水，席卷一切进入视野的可用之材，但大浪淘尽后，选择时就要格外注意这些素材的特征属性，看准了着手点才能下手。一个可能的论点必须作者有话可说才能选用，但如果对一个论点有太多话要说，就应该停下来，看看这些话能否安插在其他论点上。这也是出于观察论点间交叉性的需要。比如我选生活节奏改变，引发出速食对食量的影响，再引出对身体的影响，但个选择的论点是营养价值对身体的影响，两个论点就交叉在一起了。
在挑选论点，寻找言之有物这个“物”的时候，一定要注意避免层面的交叉，而这个层面，也要从托福写作题目中来：题目问的是对生活质量的影响，这些选择的层面一定和生活质量有关。生活质量又有什么层面呢?身体健康是一层，心理健康是一层，这两者合并在一起，是人类健康生活的基本要求，而物质享受是在基本要求上的锦上添花，又可以算一层，三层不交叉的层面就找到了。
以此为依据，再回头找匹配的论点，事半功倍。此处也需要注意，破题时给出的方向只是方向，不是成熟的论点。有需要时，可以把匹配的几个方向糅合成一个论点，方便下笔。
针对本题，三个论点如下：
身体健康下降：速食对食量的影响。心理健康下降：快速的生活节奏造成压力。物质享受下降：精心调配的美食是一种格调，人们正在沉沦于生活压力中，丧失享受的品位。
这三个论点,大家可能都看得心满意足,以为思路完成了,可以下笔了.事实上就这么下笔,的确已经可以成文了.可要写成一篇动人的议论,还是不够.因为这三个论点虽不交叉,却只有一条明线为关联:这条明线就是支持全文观点.细细研究,它们再无其它联系,如果写成文章,读后不会有一气呵成的畅快淋漓之感,也不会特别深入人心.
这条暗线，应该是什么呢?是让托福写作从死板规矩的举例说理，三片豆腐块儿拼成的死文字，变成有思想，又灵性，能从纸上走出来，走进读者内心去的，作者的心声。这暗线，就是前文提过的，能赋予文章品格的，刚柔之论，是或者以情，或者以理，串联整篇文章。
既然这条暗线要贯穿全文，就必须与各个论点有一定联系。而在串连所有论点的同时，要避免交叉，就使这个暗线出于一个全新的视角。之前笔者从题目用词的角度发散思维，再根据题目提问的出发点将发散开的思维分成三股收束起来。从题目本身入手，已无处再用力，可以使用的视角，只能从个人经验和知识中采凿-----而这正是独立写作的基本要求：writing based on knowledge and experience
仍然以题目为例，笔者醉心心理学，因此这一次的暗线会从心理角度入手。调用笔者的心理学知识储备，在遗留的可能性论点中寻找可以嵌含的切入点，将可以利用的心理角度理论排列出一定顺序，落笔时以暗线而非明线的顺序依次展开论证。
托福写满作分范文的欣赏
New findings in scientific areas can examine and challenge previous assumptions. A recent finding concerning the meerkat, a burrow-dwelling animal in the African grasslands, has cast doubt upon the conventional ideas of altruism, the type of behavior in which an animal sacrifices its own interests for the benefit of another.
Meerkats were previously thought to be a typical altruistic animal. When the other meerkats feed, there is usually one meerkat watching out for predators. The sentinel meerkat gains nothing, it seems, for it can neither eat nor escape quickly and successfully after raising an alarm.
However, in the new findings, it's shown that the sentinel meerkat has already eaten food before standing guard, thus contradicting the thought that it has an empty belly while on the lookout. In addition to this, the sentinel is the first to see a predator, so it is the first to escape. It is also placed nearest a burrow, making it relatively easier to flee. Moreover, its alarm calls may cause the group either to gather or to spread rapidly, which may attract the predator's attention, providing the sentinel a better chance to escape.
The same is with supposed human altruistic behavior. Organ donation to strangers may be considered an unselfish act, which provides little reward to the donator. However, by donating his organ, the donator may most probably receive praise and appreciation from others. Isn't this non-material reward, which increases one's self worth, satisfactory to anyone?
篇4：托福写作常用例子(英文版)
托福写作常用例子汇总(英文版)
1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge) Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Career preparation:
a) Courses designed to meet the market requirement
b) Instructors are knowledgeable and have hands-on experience
c) Classmates and friends are invaluable resources for the future career
2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Agree. Parents are the best teachers
1) Parents know us most because of relations and time that we stay together
2) The earliest education came from parents when we were little kids. We are more likely to accept the instructions from our parents.
托福写作素材：成功的企业
After working with dozens of small companies, I discovered that the successful ones share some common traits. Here, then, are the 14 qualities I've witnessed in many of the thriving small businesses I've worked with:
Company culture. Culture is defined as the “integrated pattern of human knowledge, belief and behavior that depends upon man's capacity for learning and transmitting knowledge to succeeding generations.” For successful companies, culture is about attracting and hiring the people who would be most successful in that specific organization. And it's about driving the behavior that makes the company successful.
Customer service. Simply defined, customer service means taking care of your customers. Many companies integrate customer service into their business culture through training and the design (and frequent redesign) of relevant business processes. In most cases, the business plan dictates how they will provide quality customer service.
Business strategy. A complex strategy or business plan isn't necessary to achieve success. A simple one-page document will do, but it should be well thought out and well executed. A poorly crafted business plan that's well executed is far superior to the well-crafted business plan that sits on the shelf collecting dust. A good business plan defines and drives the activities and behaviors of the entire organization. Without it, the business becomes a ship without a rudder; it simply can't be steered and ends up going around in circles. A sound strategy should include a financial plan, marketing differentiators, and product strategy as well as a plan for employee retention.
Training. Because we live in a world of continuous change, it's more important than ever to implement a culture of continuous learning. For many successful owners, continual investment in training is a major contributor to success. For training to be successful, however, there must be a direct link back to the business plan and an understanding of how training supports the successful implementation of the business strategy.
重点表达摘抄：
share some common traits ：有共同点
attracting and hiring the people who：吸引并雇佣_样的人
taking care of your customers:伺候好顾客
integrate s/th into：把_融入到_
be well thought out and well executed：经过深思熟虑然后执行的
poorly crafted business plan ：没有被精细制作的商业计划
is far superior to ：前者比后者高级的
well-crafted business plan ：精细制作的商业计划
sits on the shelf collecting dust：搁置起来 (比喻形同虚设的政策等)
drives the activities and behaviors of the entire organization：
驱动整个组织的活动和行为
a ship without a rudder：没有舵的船
product strategy :产品策略
employee retention：员工保有率
in a world of continuous change：在不停变换的世界里
implement a culture of continuous learning：实施一个不断学习的文化
is a major contributor to success：_是一个成功的重要因素
重要句子：
It simply can't be steered and ends up going around in circles.
无法驾驶并原地打转。
适用的题目：
For any business to be successful, one must spend a lot of money on advertising.
托福写作技巧：如何快速得出作文论据?
托福作文题目的难度体现最主要就是在作文题目越来越抽象，越来越不容易想到理由。其实，当面对这些题目的时候，很多人总会把自己投入一个怪圈，这个怪圈就是单纯的死扣这个问题，而不是试图将这个问题扩展或者细化。
作文理由，最忌讳的就是就事论事，不作任何扩展。当不作任何扩展的时候，也就是不做任何细化的时候，其实不惯是老托福还是新托福，一个寻找作文理由最大的利器就是细化。
例题分析1、所谓细化，就是不要拘泥于单纯的题目。一定要进行举例!
比如说：
02月11日独立作文题目(更正版本)：Do you agree or disagree the following statement : Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
与2002月05日中国大陆独立作文题目：Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better?
第一个题目，大家都觉得很空，“领导力”到底该怎么找理由，完全没有头绪。
第二个题目，也是一样的，“具有挑战性的梦想”与“现实的目标”感觉远不如老托福里面的“是否建立工厂”好想理由。
但是如果我们对于领导力进行举例，我们自然而然的就会想到乔布斯，绝对是一个超伟大的大企业家，乔布斯有什么过人的能力呢。
1)创新能力，否则不会有iphone与ipad;
2)审美能力，否则Mac的字体不会那么漂亮，iphone也不会那么完美 ;
3)坚韧不拔的能力，否则也不会建立皮克斯东山再起。再来想创新能力，我们可以通过旅游来获得，什么可以通过学习来获得，坚韧可以通过体育来获得。到这，不也就找到了写作的方向了么。
再比如说现实的梦想，还是挑战性的梦想，我们也可以进行举例。现实的梦想：
1)去海南旅游;
2)考全班前5 ;
3)给父母买礼物。
为什么要做这些事情呢?
1)去海南旅游，可以多游泳，锻炼身体;
2)考全班前5，可以激发自己的积极性，告诉自己通过自己的努力可以实现;
3)给父母买礼物，可以增进家庭成员的感情。这不就有很好的理由了么。
2、当然或许你还觉得不够，那咱们再来看一个2012年第一场托福考试
2012年01月08日独立作文：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.的题目。
人们是否能不靠上级部门的关注，自己解决重要问题。首先举个例子，到底什么算重要问题。买房难算是大问题吧，要不是在国内买不起房，你为什么要出国呢。
买房都涉及什么。
1)地点：父母可以帮你选;
2)钱：父母可以帮你提供;
3)电器和装修：自己赚钱解决。
当然，有些考友会觉得这样的就太琐碎了。其实很简单，你可以再提炼吗，这个题目，“地点”就可以提炼为前期准备;“钱”就可以提炼为“资金”;“电器和装修”就可以提炼为“后期升级和维护”，这不就是3个理由出来了么。
托福作文理由，切忌就事论事，其实只要我们大胆的进行举例，然后需要的时候，再适当提炼，其实作文思路是非常好寻找的。
前几天给姑娘写情书的时候，你也不能只写我爱你，还一定要写“不看你的眼，不看你的眉，看的时候心里跳，看过以后眼泪垂，不看你的眼，不看你的眉，不看你也爱上你，忘了我是谁”这里的眼与眉不都是举例么。
托福写作常用例子汇总(英文版)
篇5：托福写作经典例子主要有哪些
There is no denying that happiness originates in the acts of meeting people's various needs. Nowadays some people claim that happiness is more affected by the job they owned than their social life. This is a popular misunderstanding. As far as I am concerned, social life and jobs have the equal role in making people feel happy, because they can respectively satisfy people's different needs.
On the one hand, a decent and well-paid job can provide us with a large amount of money, which could fulfill our material needs and improve our living standards. For example, with adequate financial resources we can live in a spacious and well-decorated house with six bedrooms and eight restrooms. We can travel around the world and visit the Forbidden City inChina, the Liberty Statue inAmericaand the Big Ben inBritain. In addition, such a good deal of money enables us to keep fit by having nutritious diet and mineral water transferred from the water source. Meanwhile, we can hire a personal doctor around the clock in case of any emergence of disease. We do not have to wait for a long time by standing in the long and crowed lines of patients in hospitals. All these things will definitely make us feel happy.
On the other hand, the important role of social life in helping us attain happiness can not be ignored. Confucius, one of the greatest philosophers and educators inChina, once remarked that it is a pleasant thing to meet with a friend from afar, which indicates that friendship is another source of happiness. Participation in social activities will enlarge our social circle and make us make acquaintance with more people. For example, if you are a bookworm, you can take part in readers' association where you will encounter a lot people who share a common interest. Chatting and talking with them will help form a deep friendship and make you have a better mood. The reason underlying the above example is that your need of communicating with others is met by participating in social life.
In conclusion, since happiness depends on the fulfillment of one's need, social life and jobs combines together to make us happy. It is an exaggeration to say that your job has more effects on happiness than your social life.
篇6：托福写作经典例子主要有哪些
Spending a significant amount of time with someone is necessary to get to know their personalities and temperaments. Sometimes, people can also tell a person’s quality and determine his or her personality by analyzing their behaviors. When it comes to the question of whether one can learn about another person from the books or movies that the person likes, I personally am in favor of this statement based on the following reasons.
First off, by judging from the books or movies or even TV programs that someone like we can tell a person’s interests and hobbies, consequently we can learn more about them. For example, My roommate back in college was really into auto magazines, TV shows and even movies featuring fancy sports cars. At first, I didn’t know him so well to know his hobbies and interests, however, I was sure at that time that he must have been a big fan of cars. Indeed, my judgment was right and he was a car freak, he likes all kinds of vehicles like sedan, SUV, recreational vehicles, etc. It is not an exaggeration to claim that he can tell not only the brand but also the version of a specific vehicle by just checking out the picture of the cockpit of the car. Ultimately, we can tell a person’s hobbies by the movies and books they like.
Additionally, the genre of the books that someone reads says a lot about the person’s character and temperament. Actually, it is natural for someone to shape their characters just because the characters in the novels or movies have a dramatic impact on the person’s behavior and attitude, regardless of the types of the characters like fairy, alien or someone with superpower. For instance, girls who read a lot of romantic novels like Gone With the Wind might be very emotional and very committed to someone they love. For someone who read science fiction novels or watch movies featuring future events and exploration of outer space tend to be very creative and willing to take risks, to be more specific, they might be someone who friends can depend on when they got stuck in some sort of exploration.
For someone who likes to read classics of all times like the works by Jane Austen or Ernest Hemingway, they tend to cherish the simplicities and trivialities in lives.
In a nutshell, by judging from the genre of the book that someone reads, not only can we tell a lot about the person’s interests and hobbies but also the person's character and temperament.
篇7：托福写作经典例子主要有哪些
Despite the huge impact of the Internet, as a convenient tool for educational, vocational and recreational purposes, offering free Internet access should be viewed as a short-sighted, ill-considered proposal. For both personal and commercial concerns, Internet with no charges will inevitably bring about unexpected fallout. Therefore, I hold my point that under no circumstances should the government provide free Internet access for the public.
First, for the users of Internet, free of charge means declination of quality. So limited is the total bandwidth of Internet access, that more computers and phones connected to the Internet means slower speed for each individual user. Now, as Internet could be available only after payment, those unwilling to spend money on the Internet leaves fairly enough bandwidth for the registered users. However, were Internet free of charge for citizens, almost everyone, whether with urgent or irrelevant aims, would have connected to the Internet for 24 hours 7 days. Then, without doubt, so many citizens watching online videos, downloading large-scale softwares or chatting via video cam with more than 10 friends, the Internet must be slower than those using a primitive 14.4k modem. So, for the rights to access fast enough Internet, government should never make it free.
Second, for the businesses providing Internet access, free Internet services will ruin their future. As Internet become an essential part for people’s life, many companies working on offering fast, stable Internet access become strong business tycoons. For instance, Vodafone, one of the largest Internet service provider, has established 14 branches in different countries and recruited over 1.4 million employees. However, were free Internet service emerged, what would probably happen to these fast-growing business? Internet users, finding ways to download music or send voice mails without any charge, will soon abandon these Internet business sending bills to them every month. Then, not only such business would go bankruptcy, all the staff would thus become unemployed, which could be a huge economic and social disaster for government.
In conclusion, both considering the privileges for Internet users and the destiny of Internet service providers, I strongly believe that government should never try to make Internet access free.
篇8：如何写好托福写作例子
如何写好托福写作例子
一.具体的例子
Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The students in university should not do any part-time jobs.
Position: Disagree
Reason: Doing part-time jobs can intensify our social ability.
Exemplification: Take myself for example. When I was a fresh man，I found it really hard to get along with people around me. Then I was advised to take a job as a waiter in the restaurant during which I had chances to communicate with different customers, making them satisfied with my “smile” service. After a year, I myself can realize that I have become more outgoing and understanding.
写一个很具体例子的时候同学们要注意几个问题：
1、不要写得特别长，写太多就变成了记叙文，而我们的托福独立写作是议论文体;
2、这种例子一定要和说理分析性的内容结合在一起才能够支撑起来一个主体段。
二.假设性的例子
假设性的例子有两点好处。其一就是别人不会怀疑我们写的这个例子的真实性，二就是假设性的例子其实是analytic example，这种伴随着分析的例子其实要更符合托福独立写作的风格，更能够体现一个学生的分析能力与水平，毕竟议论文的特点就是分析和证明。
Topic：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Land needs to be used to meet human need rather than to protect endangered animals.
Position：Protect endangered animals
Reason: Another important reason to protect endangered animals is that the delicate ecological balance of an area might be irreparably harmed by their extinction.
Exemplification: For example, if humans chop down forests and use the land to grow corn, they might simultaneously destroy the habitats of a kind of bird that eats locusts. The next year because the locust population can grow unchecked, locusts might destroy the entire nearby corn crop. Not only do the birds lose their homes, but humans are also harmed. The ecological balance of many natural habitats is still not well understood and humans interfere in it at their peril.
上一个例子，考生能够感受到假设性的例子的威力。整段文章篇幅短，例子少，但是却非常有效地证明了段首的观点即保护生态平衡的重要性。所以，文章不一定要写很多，但是一定要写好，永远不要忘了，独立写作的灵魂和核心就是去证明一个观点的合理性和说服力，所以你用的手段很重要。
托福语法题做题规律口诀
这一口诀的含义是:做托福改错题时,分二个不同的步骤来考虑题.先凭语感 直接判断;如果找 不到正确答案,再从“理性”即语言规律或语言规则的层次解决问题.首先是“语感”.托福改错题的“错误”——即正确选项——有相当一部分处于表层,凭直觉或语感一眼即可识别. 如:
(9) (Constantly) advances (made) by medicine and technology (extend) appreciably the average (person's) life expectancy.
题中的advances不可能是动词——因为托福语法不考祈使句,而且祈使句动词,需是原型. 副词一般不能修饰名词——只有不是以“ly”结尾的“原型”副词可以,而且只能做后置定语. 所以,只读前两个词即知答案.
(10) (Alike) most (ethnic) groups is American society, Italians Americans (maintain) many fo the traditions of their (mother country).
由于alike只能做表语或后置定语,决不会出现再句首,——类似的以弱读a开始的形容词如 alight,alive等基本上都是这样——所以只读一个词即知答案.
同时需要提到的是,like,unlike,likely和alike意义和用法的区分是托福结构(语法)—— 特别是改错部分——的一个经常性的题眼.其意义和用法上的区别如下:
like是动词(喜欢)和介词(象);
unlike是介词(不像)
likely是形容词,通常作表语或定语
alike是形容词——通常作表语和后置定语;以及作副词通常作状语.
这里我们似乎还应该加上dislike(不喜欢).
口诀四 一个逗号看对面,两个逗号不用看
在作托福语法题时,标点符号也有着一定——有时甚至是相当重要——的意义.譬如,分号,冒号之后都相当于另一个句子开始,这时彼此间的语法关系一般不需要再考虑. —— Alexander Hamilton and John Adams wanted to have was almost the same: a fairly centralized government for the newly established United States.
我们在解这道题时,无需考虑冒号后的句子成分,因为它对我们解决问题已不产生任何影响.这 样可以大大地简化句法关系. 在作托福语法题时,标点符号中意义或作用最大的要算逗号了.正确地判断逗号所反映的关系 时正确,快速解题的一个关键组成部分.在遇到逗号时,首先要确定“真逗号”还是“假逗号”.有三种情况下的逗号应该被看作是“假逗号”,对我们解题没有意义,所以不予考虑:
1. 表示并列关系的逗号.如: —— images out of clay, stone, and metal.
2. 大小时间单位和大小地名之间的逗号.如: Boston, Massachusetts used to be the largest city.
3. 出现在句末的同位语.如: The last groups of Indians were driven into North Dakota, a state in northwest U.S.A……
除此之外,逗号则为“真逗号”.只有“真逗号”对于我们作题——尤其是填空题——才具有意义,甚至是极大的帮助.在填空题中,如题干中出现一个逗号,首先读没有空的部分并确定其在句中的作用,然后再考虑有空的部分,即“一个逗号看对面”.如:
(11) —— vastness of Grand Canyon, it is difficult to capture it in a single photograph.
A. While the B. The
C. For the D. Because of the
解这样的题,我们就先从没有空的那已部分开始;而且这个句子中的“对面”部分只需要读两个词“it is”即可,因为从这两个词我们已经知道逗号之后是主句,从而可以确定逗号之前只能是从句或短语.按“口诀二”——“去掉独立成分”——逗号前只剩下vastness,不可能是从句; 而for在句首一般只有一种情况“for all……”,所以答案是D.
(12) Because of its importance in modern living,—— in all parts of the world.
A. algebra is studied in schools and colleges
B. studying algebra in schools and colleges
C. and the study of algebra in schools and colleges
D. in schools and colleges are algebra studies
这道题在经过“口诀二,四”处理后,题干没有剩下任何成分!这就意味着正确答案必须是一个完整的句子,所以答案只能是A. 如果题干中出现了两个“真逗号”,而且空白出现在第一个逗号之前或第二个逗号之后,那么两个逗号之间的部分一般可以不考虑,并按无逗号处理.即“两个逗号不用看”.
(13) Willa Cather considered her novel of life in nineteenth-century Nebraska, My Antonia,—— .
A. was her best work
B. her best work
C. her best work it was
D. being her best work
上句在经过“口诀二,四”处理后,题干只剩下“Willa Cather considered her novel—— ”.显然缺少的是“宾语补足语”,我们很容易选中正确答案B.
托福语法题做题规律口诀
在托福结构(语法)中，句子内部主句与从句及各从句之间的关系是重要的“出题点”;因而，掌握这些变化的规律对于在短时间内选对正确答案是十分重要的。
我们知道，英语中具有句子(clause)之间连接功能的词按照我们中国英语学习者的习惯分为三类：
1. 表示并列或平行关系的连接词。这类只有三个词：
表示共存关系的“and”，实际上”and”前后的逻辑关系很复杂;
表示矛盾或取舍关系的“but”，但当连接两个句子时，“but”的作用更倾向于作关联词;
表示选择关系的“or”，但在连接句子的时候，“or“更多的是作关联词，表示一种假设关系：“否则的话”。
2.表示偏正关系，构成主句与副词性从句——即状语从句——之间关系的关联词。这类词相对较多，有几十个。如：”when“、“because”、“if”等。
3.表示偏正关系，构成主句与名词性或形容词性从句——包括主语从句、宾语从句或表语从句、同位语从句、定语从句——之间关系的关系代词。这类词比连
接词多，但比关联词要少。如：“that“、“who”、“which”等。
为了表述上方便，我们口诀中的“连词”实际上指的是“关联词”和“关系代词”，因为这两类词的变化相对要复杂一些，而且常是托福考试的“出题点”或“题眼”所在。至于三个连接词，“and”连接的句子无论有多少个，只须考虑中间的一个;“but”和“or“在连接句子时，按“关联词”处理即可。
除了上面的这些“正常”情况外，还有一些特殊情况，而上面的这个“口诀”在一定程度上反映了托福结构(语法)题中“连词”的几种特殊变化规律。而且，这样特殊情况是考试的一个非常重要的“出题点”。
一.省略
(17)——native tO Europe，the daisy has now spread throughout most Of NorthAmerica.
A.Although B.If it were C.In spite D.That it is
解这一道题时，就涉及到连词的省略问题。常规解题方法是：首先，根据“一个逗号看对面”的口诀，我们知道逗号后是主句，进而知道逗号之前要么是从句，要么是短语。所以第一个被排除掉的是“D”项——因为”that“所能引导的必须是名词性或形容词性从句(只有
”so that“、“so/such…that”和“in that”例外;本来还应包括“now that'’，但迄今为止这一结构在托福语法考题中还没有作为“题眼”出现过)，在这里不可能。继而被排除的是“C”项，因为”native“在这儿只能是形容词——这里”native“绝不可能是名词，具体原因后面“口诀七”将要讨论。随后要剔除的是“B”项，因为”if it were“显然是虚拟语气，而主句是直陈语气。但“A”项可以吗?选项中既没有主语又没有谓语动词。回答是肯定的，因为”Although”所引导的从句属可“省略”的范围，而且这里又符合“省略”的条件。
究竟什么是“省略”呢?我们这里的“省略”指的一些状语从句在一定的条件下可以省略句中的某些成分。那么，都有哪一些从句可以“省略”?省略的“条件”是什么?可以省略哪些“句子成分”呢?
首先，由下列几个关联词引导的从句在托福语法考题中属于可以省略的范围：“as”“if”、“unless”(条件)，“when”、“while“(时间)，“though(although)”(转折)，“even if(though)”(让步)，“once”(假设)。
省略的条件有： —
1.主句的主语与从句的主语逻辑上相一致;
2.从句是以“be”的适当形式作谓语的“主——系——表”结构或“类主——系——表”结构.后者指的是进行体(时)“be+V-ing”或被动语态“be+V-ed”.
被省略的部分包括:主语,“be”的人称,时态形式及其前面的情态动词,助动词等.上面例句中实际上相当于省略了“it(the daisy) is”.
二.双重
(18)——touching in O Henry's stories is the gallantry with which ordinary people struggle to maintain their dignity?
A.Most is B.Is mostly C.Is it most D.What is most
本题在“去掉独立成分”后只剩了—is the gallantry“。很显然缺少了主语.但四个选项几乎都有一个代词加一个谓语动词。这就意味着作为正确答案的那个选项中的代词必须一词二用——一个词充当两个成分;这样再加上”touching”(这里“touching”不是作后置定语，所以不“独立’’)和“the gallantry“分别充当两个“is’’的主语和表语。最终答案是”D“.为什么呢?因为四个选项中只有”what“具有“双重”的功能.
那么，具体地说，什么是“双重”?托福语法部分常见的具有“双重”功能的连词有哪些呢?所谓的“双重”，这里指的是连词除了正常的句法功能外还充当另外一个句子成分。而所谓的“正常”指的是按照一般的语法规则要求。在这种”正常“的情况下：
①形容词性(定语从句)的连词(关系代词)除有“关联”功能外还在从句中充当一个实际成分
(主语、动词宾语、介词宾语或定语)。如：
The same forces that create surface tension in any sample Of water are
托福语法题做题规律口诀
我们知道，英语中具有句子(clause)之间连接功能的词按照我们中国英语学习者的习惯分为三类：
1. 表示并列或平行关系的连接词。这类只有三个词：
表示共存关系的”and”，实际上“and”前后的逻辑关系很复杂;
表示矛盾或取舍关系的”but”，但当连接两个句子时，“but“的作用更倾向于作关联词;
表示选择关系的“or”，但在连接句子的时候，“or”更多的是作关联词，表示一种假设关系：“否则的话”。
2.表示偏正关系，构成主句与副词性从句——即状语从句——之间关系的关联词。这类词相对较多，有几十个。如：“when”、“because“、“if”等。
3.表示偏正关系，构成主句与名词性或形容词性从句——包括主语从句、宾语从句或表语从句、同位语从句、定语从句——之间关系的关系代词。这类词比连接词多，但比关联词要少。如：“that”、“who”、“which”等。
为了表述上方便，我们口诀中的“连词”实际上指的是“关联词”和“关系代词”，因为这两类词的变化相对要复杂一些，而且常是托福考试的“出题点”或“题眼”所在。至于三个连接词，“and”连接的句子无论有多少个，只须考虑中间的一个;“but“和“or”在连接句子时，按“关联词”处理即可。
除了上面的这些“正常”情况外，还有一些特殊情况，而上面的这个“口诀”在一定程度上反映了托福结构(语法)题中“连词”的几种特殊变化规律。而且，这样特殊情况是考试的一个非常重要的“出题点”。
一.省略
(17)——native tO Europe，the daisy has now spread throughout most Of NorthAmerica.
A.Although B.If it were C.In spite D.That it is
解这一道题时，就涉及到连词的省略问题。常规解题方法是：首先，根据“一个逗号看对面”的口诀，我们知道逗号后是主句，进而知道逗号之前要么是从句，要么是短语。所以第一个被排除掉的是“D”项——因为“that”所能引导的必须是名词性或形容词性从句(只有 “so that”、“so/such…that“和”in that“例外;本来还应包括”now that'’，但迄今为止这一结构在托福语法考题中还没有作为“题眼”出现过)，在这里不可能。继而被排除的是“C”项，因为“native”在这儿只能是形容词——这里“native”绝不可能是名词，具体原因后面“口诀七”将要讨论。随后要剔除的是“B”项，因为“if it were”显然是虚拟语气，而主句是直陈语气。但“A”项可以吗?选项中既没有主语又没有谓语动词。回答是肯定的，因为“Although”所引导的从句属可“省略”的范围，而且这里又符合“省略”的条件。
究竟什么是“省略”呢?我们这里的“省略”指的一些状语从句在一定的条件下可以省略句中的某些成分。那么，都有哪一些从句可以“省略”?省略的“条件”是什么?可以省略哪些“句子成分”呢?
首先，由下列几个关联词引导的从句在托福语法考题中属于可以省略的范围：”as““if”、“unless”(条件)，”when“、“while”(时间)，“though(although)”(转折)，“even if(though)”(让步)，“once“(假设)。
省略的条件有： —
1.主句的主语与从句的主语逻辑上相一致;
2.从句是以”be“的适当形式作谓语的”主——系——表“结构或”类主——系——表“结构.后者指的是进行体(时)”be+V-ing“或被动语态”be+V-ed“.
被省略的部分包括:主语,”be“的人称,时态形式及其前面的情态动词,助动词等.上面例句中实际上相当于省略了”it(the daisy) is“.
二.双重
(18)——touching in O Henry's stories is the gallantry with which ordinary people struggle to maintain their dignity?
A.Most is B.Is mostly C.Is it most D.What is most
本题在“去掉独立成分”后只剩了—is the gallantry”。很显然缺少了主语.但四个选项几乎都有一个代词加一个谓语动词。这就意味着作为正确答案的那个选项中的代词必须一词二用——一个词充当两个成分;这样再加上“touching”(这里”touching“不是作后置定语，所以不“独立’’)和“the gallantry”分别充当两个“is’’的主语和表语。最终答案是“D”.为什么呢?因为四个选项中只有“what”具有“双重“的功能.
那么，具体地说，什么是”双重“?托福语法部分常见的具有”双重“功能的连词有哪些呢?所谓的“双重”，这里指的是连词除了正常的句法功能外还充当另外一个句子成分。而所谓的”正常”指的是按照一般的语法规则要求。在这种“正常”的情况下：
①形容词性(定语从句)的连词(关系代词)除有“关联”功能外还在从句中充当一个实际成分(主语、动词宾语、介词宾语或定语)。如：
The same forces that create surface tension in any sample Of water are responsible fOr the maintenance Of these unbroken columns Of water.(充当主语) The early European settlers Of the United States did not abandon the diversions with which their ancestors had traditionally relieved the tedium of life.(充当介词宾语)
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