“蜜豆年糕”通过精心收集，向本站投稿了8篇托福写作满分，以下是小编整理后的托福写作满分，欢迎阅读分享，希望对您有所帮助。
篇1：托福写作满分
题目：
It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
托福作文满分范文：
There are two main channels for people to learn knowledge –from books and from experience.
Generally, knowledge gained from books is theoretical, that gained from experience is practical. It is difficult to answer which is more important to we people. It depends on the phases and events of our learning. Knowledge learned from books is instructive, which perhaps cannot learn directly from experience. We often hear thunders and see lightning in the sky, and we can easily find that lightning will be seen sooner than sound will be heard. According to our experience alone, we cannot tell why it had happened. But when we learn some physics in textbooks, we will find the answer clearly that because light travels faster than sound does, it takes less time for light to travel the same distance than for sound. Therefore, book knowledge can inform us some useful theories that can give us general ideas and help us understand the real phenomenon better.
In turn, practice knowledge check out the theories gained from books. There is an old Chinese saying that practice is the only criterion of inspecting the truth. So not all knowledge from books is credible, even false. When Aristotle wrote in his transcripts that the earth is the center of our planets, no one doubts this for centuries. However, when Galileo read about it, he did not suspect it at first, but when he made some observation and research, he found it is not the truth. Then comes the new theory—Sun center theory.
In our daily life, we can learn much information from practice. To learn swimming, it is useless to be absorbed in reading skills written in books. Only when you learn it in a swimming pool, can you make it. There are still a lot of things you must learn from your own experience, such as driving a car, riding a bicycle, operating a machine. And the most important is that it is often easier learn knowledge from practice than from books. As far as the average people are concerned, it is natural to learn from experience. Primitive people learned skills hand by hand which is the way they were handed down from one generation to another.
Modern people also learn things in practice. In workshops, leading workers teach apprentices carefully; in activity clubs, teachers teach youngsters to be familiar with their hobbies. It is obvious that all of things considered knowledge gained from practice is more close and direct than from the books.
Therefore, two kinds of knowledge has importance. For research people , knowledge from books is more important, while for our average people, knowledge from practice is more important. As students, we must first learn knowledge from books well, and at the same time we must have the good sense to tell from what is right and what is wrong.
托福作文满分范文：
We gain our knowledge about the world and our life from two sources: from experience and from books. These two resources are both important, but which of them is more important?
Knowledge from books forms a very important part of our knowledge structure. In schools and colleges, we learn knowledge which is fundamental to our future career. We learn knowledge from books in order to make our contributions to this society in the future. A student learns mathematic equations and other scientific knowledge and become a scientist or engineer. We will be illiterate and ignorant without learning knowledge from books. Moreover, we acquire knowledge about life and the world by reading books, magazines and newspapers. This is also very important as we cannot experience everything all by ourselves. Therefore books are a very important source of knowledge.
On the other hand, we can't learn everything from a book. “Experience is the best teacher” is an old cliché, but I agree with it. The most important, and sometimes the hardest, lessons we learn in life come from our participation in situations. We learn how to get along with others or how to have self-respect from our experience, not from books. We cannot learn emotional feelings, such as love and care, through books; they come from our real life experience. Knowledge from experience is also a very important supplement to knowledge from books.
Needless to say both learning sources, books and experience, are very important to us. But in my opinion knowledge from experience is more important, because without knowledge from experience, it is impossible to get a real understanding of knowledge from books, and how to apply this knowledge to real world situations.
篇2：托福写作满分
题目：
A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
托福作文满分范文：
I have been living in a peace and quiet town for about 10 years. All people around here is so kind, and the landscape is so beautiful that I love this town very much. Recently I heard news that a company will set up a new factory near my community. I was shocked and I hold a negative opinion about this decision.
The main reason why I oppose this plan is that establishing a new factory will cause air pollution. As we know, a factory will give off a lot of waste air which is harmful to people's health. Even though the factory will take measurements to purify the air, it can not make the air as clean as before. It is no doubt that people's health will be affected by the air emitted from the factory.
Another reason is that a factory makes too much noise. My community is always a quiet place and this is just what I like the most. A factory will cause the town to become too noisy. For example, every morning, we can be awake from our dreams by the noise of buses which take workers to the factory. The noise of engines will also influent our temper, and may cause us susceptible to anger, and easily lose temper.
Furthermore, a strong reason to oppose this idea is that building a factory will destroy the landscape of this town. Most people living in this town make their living by cultivating and harvesting crops. The factory is inappropriate with the landscape of the town and it will occupy the land that is used to farming.
Of course, building a factory also has advantages to some extent. For example, it will bring more working opportunity for local people, and also it will help developing the local economics. But comparing with the disadvantages, I strongly oppose the idea to build a factory near my community.
托福作文满分范文：
If a large factory is going to be built near your community, is it good or bad? It’s a quite difficult question to answer. Because there are many aspects to take into your consideration, the advantages and the disadvantages. Let’s talk about that.
First, a large factory, especially a large chemical factory is quite harmful to our environment when it is built near our community. It will affect our daily life a lot. All the chemical factories will produce a lot of waste and most of the wastes are harmful to the environment, including poisonous gas and liquid. Some of them can not be entirely broken down. If they are released into the air or the river, it will affect our health. And also the factory may produce a lot of noise. The environment we want to live in is a quiet and peaceful one, so the noise will be quite boring. And yes, noise also affects our health.
Still one thing, a factory can be very dangerous. Because a fire or a explosion may break out in the factory. If it’s very near our home, it’s quite dangerous.
But in other hand , a factory may be a good news to us. It can provide more jobs for us, especially for the young people in our community. Since the factory is near, it’s so convenient to go to work.. and the factory will get more chances to our area. It will help to develop our area. So if the factory can bring us a lot of chances, we will agree to build one. But the most important things are:
1. Build the factory in a safe distance from our community, not too near.
2. Make sure that the factory can deal with the waste properly. Do not release the poisonous gas
into the air, and not release the waste water into the river nearby.
3. Make sure the security guard in the factory works very well.
托福作文满分范文：
I support the idea that a factory to be built near our community. I list my reasons as follows. Firstly, a new factory near our community helps to improve living standard of people in our community. The factory will employ a lot of workers. As a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. Many people in our community will find a job in the factory. As people's income increases, they will be able to spend more money on their food, clothing and leisure time, and the quality of life will be increased.
Secondly, a new factory will bring prosperity to our community. The tax collected from a factory is an important source of revenue for our town. As people have higher income, income tax collected will also be increased. The town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development. Moreover, in order to accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. This will boost real estate development in our community.
Some people say that a factory would bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air and water in town. This is not the truth. Modern technologies have made today's factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum. There are also worries that the social structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. We should understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time.
Of course, there will be some drawbacks of building a new factory here. But in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the dangers. I strongly support to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.
篇3：托福写作满分攻略
首考托福拿下写作满分的大牛告诉你，你离满分只有四个误区的距离
误区一：拿高分一定要语言高大上
许多同学认为，自己拿不了写作高分，是因为自己的用词不够华丽，句式太简单。但是其实，我首考时，用的都是最基本的托福水准词语，没有什么大词。但关键是，我的词语一直都在以同义词的方式变换着，句型虽然也只使用了几种，但也是交叉变换着用。变化很重要，这能体现考生对于语言的灵活运用程度，给考官一种新颖的感觉。
托福写作中可以灵活运用的九种句型：
主谓宾
主系表
There be
被动
强调句型A
Eg: It is the picture of ..hat impresses me deeply.
强调句型B
Eg: The picture of ..does have a deep impression in my memory.
倒装
Eg: Were you stand beside the sea, you would remember the happy moment in the past. (倒装+虚拟)
虚拟
平行
Eg：《双城记》给了我们best example:
It was the best of times,
It was the worst of times.....
We had everything before us, we had nothing before us......
误区二：套用模板一定拿不了高分
有的同学认为，拿满分的同学一定没有用模板。但是，模板是自己对于“未知性”很大的托福写作考试的最好的准备，哪怕遇到很难的题目，也能自信满满地“噼里啪啦”敲出一两行模板句，然后写作的灵感就来了。如果事先没有任何写作模板的准备，等到考试时脑子一热，就啥也写不出来了，只能面红耳赤地坐在那儿听考场中别人热热闹闹的键盘敲打声。
综合写作中一定要用模板，一定要用模板，一定要用模板!在时间比较紧的综合写作时，用模板可以节约时间，为自己增加信心和底气。
独立写作中，开头、中间段的开头结尾句、结尾都可以用模板，这样自己的句型都尽在自己的掌控内，将更多的时间放在作文内容的构思上。用模板时，不要照搬网上或者机构老师给的模板，自己学聪明一点，DIY拼凑、用同义词、同义句的形式修改一下，就是自己的unique one啦!
附上一份综合写作模板：
The lecture is mainly discussing_____, _______and _______ by____, challenging what are stated in the reading passage that _____, _______and _______.
First of all, the speaker thinks that ______. In contrast, the reading passage believes that ______. So, the lecture totally disagrees with the view made in the reading.
Second, the speaker discusses______, contradicting what is stated in the reading that ______.
Finally, the speaker raises the issue that ______. This point disagrees that ______ demonstrated in the reading.
误区三：字数一定要多才能拿高分
许多机构的老师都会信誓旦旦地跟学生说：“字数写不到500字，还想拿高分?”但是我写作考满分那次，综合写作写了273个字，独立写作也只写了368个字，真心不能算是字数多的。我有个同学自己参加考试，洋洋洒洒争分夺秒，考场独立写作打了七百多个字，可最后只有23分，可见字数多不见得就能拿高分。
我的经验是字数可以不多，但是一定要说理具体、条理清晰，句子之间要有逻辑，思维不要太跳跃。考官一天批改那么多作文，当然喜欢读上去很顺畅、连贯的作文啦!
误区四：托福写作的准备只需要想思路
许多同学觉得，只要捧着托福写作机经想想思路，就能在考场上写作得心应手。但是，我认为，托福写作一定要上机练习!想思路和上机亲自写作完全是不一样的感觉!想思路的结果就是，考场上有了思路可却无从下手，对句型的掌握程度、词汇句子的使用和表达完全不熟练，甚至连打字都磕磕绊绊，时时打错，这种不熟练会使自己更加紧张、慌张，从而影响自己的发挥。
而如果平时就经常上机练习，考试时就会感到非常心态平和，打字都特别顺畅，写起句子来很熟练，表达清晰，完全就是平时训练的感觉。
托福听力满分经验：认清水平，对症下药
想跟大家分享的第一个观点：大家对自己的听力认识一定要有非常清晰的认识，而且准备材料的时候一定要对症下药。
这个怎么讲呢?因为大家可能提到听力之后都会说：我什么时候才能听懂英文原版电影?我什么时候才能听懂新闻?或者是我什么时候能考到四六级，或者是托福雅思听力的高分?那么这个时候大家不要去臆想，说我是不是坚持一两个月就能听懂了。
我觉得大家先应该做的事情，是对自己的水平，自己的成绩有一个比较精准的把握在跨越每个级别的时候我们要做好一个准备：就是你得每天听。因为你的耳朵如果有一天不接触到英语，不听到东西的话，你有可能会生疏，三天之后你就发现，唉!感觉就不一样了，一个礼拜不听你就发现，啊!真的是一日不见如隔三秋，耳朵就会不知不觉的较迟钝一点。不管怎么样每天你要固定听一个东西，而且听的东西要反复，比如说你三天可以听同样的东西，但是每天都得听。
那如果你了解了自己的水平之后，也知道每天需要有一定量输入，(这个输入不仅仅局限于说我每天都要听新的，也可以一个礼拜就听这么一条，或者三天听这么一条都可以)只要你每天有这个输入，而且是不断的持续的，那么在跨越每一个级别的时候，大概需要的时间是四个月到半年左右。如果大家想加速，比如我想要快速的在两个月当中就跨越一个级别。那么你们要做的，就是每天投入双倍的时间。所以什么时候能跨越不同的级别取决于大家投入这个时间。
关于听力材料，不能今天听这个明天听那个。我们应该比较专注的去固定的去听一个东西。比如说我们在提高听力的时候可能很多同学想要看英文电影，我看美剧就是为了提高我的听力，但是其实这个效果是非常不好的，那个就是泛听，它不能达到听力能力的提高，我们每天一定要注意要精听。有时候我们看电影只是为了看剧，或者是学一两句地道的口语表达，甚至是有些同学看完美剧之后学了很多骂人的话。所以其实我们看美剧的目的是要提高听力，那么这个是会很难的。它的听力它的语速是非常非常快的，而且有比较多的俚语，非正常的书面表达，所以不建议大家听这个美剧电视什么的。反而大家可以现在开始听新闻，BBC的新闻，还有很多电台的新闻，都是非常好的。
最后分享给大家一个小故事，就是我如何去发现自己在听力上面有巨大突破的。在我大学的三年级的时候，我曾经坚持每天听一则新闻，这个新闻的长度是一分多钟，我每天坚持听写一段常速新闻，我坚持了一年。当然有个别天数是没有坚持下来的，就坚持了一年之后我发现我去考雅思，然后莫名其妙的就考了7.5的一个听力。这个分数不是很高，但是就是在那一年当中我坚持完之后，发现我的听力莫名其妙的就这么高了。所以证明我的耳朵在这一年当中不断的去被训练，不断的去适应各种的发音，各种口音，然后他会变得非常的敏感，变的识别能力非常强。目前大家耳朵基本没问题，可能目前大家对另外一门语言是看的比较多，但是天天听的确实是非常的少，导致大家耳朵是比较比较不敏感的。其实对于英语听力，大家其实应该做好一个长期抗战的准备，因为大部分学习咱们坚小持课程的同学可能上班的比较多，你们可能每天没有那么多时间去学习。那么你就做好，我要学一年两年甚至三年，只要我每天坚持听，我耳朵一定是比昨天更敏感一些。
托福阅读和托福听力双满分经验分享
我如何获得托福阅读和听力双满分
由于时间仓促没有来得及仔细准备，我的托福备考的时间只有3个星期，但结果比较满意。阅读、听力都是满分30，口语26，写作27，回头想想得到这个分数也是情理之中，毕竟自己本科学了四年的英语，如果时间充裕，相信还有提升的空间。根据我的考试经验，扎实的英语基础是独一无二的制胜法宝。我想用自己的经历来谈谈英语能力是怎么一步一步建立起来的。
听力和口语结合
我对听力和口语一直很感兴趣，所以无论是阅读，写作，听力，还是口语，在练习的过程中我都会以听说的形式进行，大一大二两年期间英语能力大增，到了大三以后，再学就是锦上添花，没有太多实质性的突破了。这期间学过的所有文章，不管是精读、泛读还是写作，我都会大声的读出来，直到读熟为止，以后再碰到读过的单词，都会马上想起这个单词出现的语境是什么，那篇文章讲的是什么。用这样的方可以让我在写作中不断写出漂亮高分的句型，在口语中既可以说出日常口语表达也可以熟练运用学术词汇传递自己观点。但是这一切都要有正确的单词发音和语音语调来支持，也就是听力!
听力应该是大部分英语学习者的硬伤，就是听不懂，不知道他们在叽里呱啦说些什么，我也跟大家一样，听力不好，口语也一样。从小接受的是填鸭教育，根本不管口语的输出，这就导致我在大一开学时，一下子接触全英授课当时就有一种强烈地culture shock，这上课啥也说不出来怎么办，当时一个老师测试我英语水平的时候就说，“你听听你说的跟我说的有什么不一样”，她自顾自说了一大堆，我真心没有听出什么不同，接下来她的解释我到现在一直都记得-“你说的话里所有单词都是重读，而我的口语中像to, and, it这样子的单词我是弱化的。”这句话对我启发很大，因为以前从来没有注意过to还会有弱读的情况，在后来的听力过程中我才了解英语句子中有弱读是多么重要的一件事情。一个句子不论长短，说话者只会强调想着重说明的部分，那我们在听的时候，如果有几个单词听了好多遍都听不清，不考虑音质的问题，只有一种合理的解释：说话人在这里把弱读这些单词，从而出现了我们不熟悉的单词发音。那么进一步来说如果他们都弱读，就说明这部分的信息不重要，我们可以忽略，那需要认真听的部分就是他们重读的信息。
弱读只是其中一种语音现象，影响听力的因素同样还有连读和失去爆破，掌握这两种语音现象对听力的提升大有帮助，因为这两种语音现象直接影响我们对于单词正确发音的理解。有时候我们会有这样一种感觉，听听力的时候感觉什么都没有听懂，但是看到原文一下子豁然开朗，接下来就会有这样一种疑问：为什么我第一遍听的时候，记的滚瓜乱熟的单词也没有听出来?造成这种情况的有两种原因：第一，不熟悉单词的正确发音。在背单词的时候要保证自己有一本带音频的单词书，先听单词的正确发音，然后重复，接着尝试拼写，检查一下自己是否根据发音把单词写对，最后再记词意，从而记住单词的正确发音。第二，语音现象捣鬼。比如一个简单的break down，如果我们在听的时候还死记break结尾有个k的发音的话，这个短语也会变成一个新词，因为在这个短语里面k会发生“只做口型不送气”的情况，我们在听的时候也只能感受到break和down中间有一个小小的停顿，大家就会听到 brea--down，这种情况在语速较快的情况下更加的明显。再比如一个短语formaleducation，我们期待的发音是两个单独的短语，但殊不知听到了forma leducation的情况，这时候相信大家的反应基本都是，这是什么单词，也就出现了为什么认识的单词听不懂的情况。
解决语音现象最好的方式就是跟读加模仿。大一时我的练习材料只有VOA慢速英语和听力课本。每听一篇VOA我都会把原文打印出来，一句一句进行跟读，感觉自己读的差不多的时候，用录音软件录下自己读的文章，然后跟原声对比，标出不一样的地方，包括单词的发音、重读弱读、语调，做进一步改进，这样坚持一年的时间，不但听力一点儿问题没有，口语的语音语调也越发纯正。但是由于前面的练习材料有限，口语中就会出现比较严重的问题—没有东西说。这时候就需要加入阅读和写作的文章，通过朗读这些文章积累一些学术词汇和地道句型表达，口语可以说的材料越来越多。另外一个练习口语的方法是自言自语，走在路上可以向自己描述一下今天的天气，看到的帅哥或者是抱怨一下即将要上的课程，这都是练习口语流利度的方法，而且在这个过程中可以进行自我修正，例如时态混乱。
听口的基础夯实之后，剩下的英语学习就是词汇量的扩充。从大三到研究生再到工作后，我的词汇量补充都是来源美剧、英剧、电影还有各种播客。我已经看过了十几部剧，题材有医学、法律、情景喜剧、犯罪、丧尸、伦理、时尚各种各样。看这些剧的时候我的重点都在记忆词汇上，很少去记忆整句话。在做托福官方真题Official的过程中，对我最有帮助的一部剧就是《生活大爆炸》，几个极客科学家天天讨论各种科学话题，像托福考试中天文类的文章，虽然我没有学过天文学，但是我有基础背景和词汇的积累，做这类文章的时候就像在阅读百科全书，非但不枯燥，反而知识性和趣味性并存。另外一个对托福考试有帮助的就是各种播客，例如 BBC的Discovery和HealthCheck，The Economist，New Yorker的Fiction和Comment频道都是语速适中，信息量丰富的听力资源，这些都可以在网上或者苹果的podcast中下载到。
托福语法指导-介词及真题要点解
介词是TOEFL试题中比较活较的词性，而且具有一定的难度。中国学生一向对介词感到束手无策，因为英文介词种类繁多且词意多变。不过，TOEFL涉及的有关介词的题目重复性很强，而且有规律可循。只要考生善于总结、记忆，还是可以保证得满分的。介词的题目主要分布在Written Expression(16-40题)中，命题焦点售在中(1)含有介词的固定短语，(2)含有特定含义的介词误用
介词常考题型及解题要点
1.含有介词的固定短语：短语或词组中的介词不能随意更换或省略
全真例题分析
(1)Most aquatic animals breathe by means external respiratory organs called gills.
(答案)C 正确的短语为by means of,其中的介词of不能省略
(2) Speed refers only toward the rate of mution without
specifying any direction of motion.(94.8)
(答案)A 正确短语形式为refer to
(3) Historical geology deals about data on the development of the Earth
gathered from the study of rocks, which are analyzed to determine their age and composition. (93.8)
(答案) A正确短语式式为deal with.
(4)The diamond is the only gemstone composed with just one chemical element, carbon.
(答案) A 正确短语形式为。Be composed of
(5) Best known for his research in statistical mechanics and meson physics. Chen Ning Yang shared the Nobel Prize in 1957 to another physicist from the United States, Tsung-dao Lee.
(答案) C 正确的短语搭配为 share.......with
(6)The doctrine of eminent domain is based the legal tradition that all real property is subject to the control of the state.
(答案) A 正确的短语形式为be based on 其中的介词on不能省掉。
篇4：托福写作满分作文
Electricity
The modern age is an age of electricity. People are so used to electric lights, radio, televisions, and telephones that it is hard to imagine what life would be like without them. When there is a power failure, people grope about in flickering candlelight, cars hesitate in the streets because there are no traffic lights to guide them, and food spoils in silent refrigerators.
Yet, people began to understand how electricity works only a little more than two centuries ago. Nature has apparently been experimenting in this field for million of years. Scientists are discovering more and more that the living world may hold many interesting secrets of electricity that could benefit humanity.
All living cell send out tiny pulses of electricity. As the heart beats, it sends out pulses of record; they form an electrocardiogram, which a doctor can study to determine how well the heart is working. The brain, too, sends out brain waves of electricity, which can be recorded in an electroencephalogram. The electric currents generated by most living cells are extremely small - often so small that sensitive instruments are needed to record them. But in some animals, certain muscle cells have become so specialized as electrical generators that they do not work as muscle cells at all. When large numbers of these cell are linked together, the effects can be astonishing.
The electric eel is an amazing storage battery. It can seed a jolt of as much as eight hundred volts of electricity through the water in which it live. (An electric house current is only one hundred twenty volts.) As many as four-fifths of all the cells in the electric eel’s body are specialized for generating electricity, and the strength of the shock it can deliver corresponds roughly to length of its body.
篇5：托福写作满分作文
Business should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In some business cultures, it is the practice to hire workers when they are young and employ them until they retire. In other business cultures companies hire people to do a job and then fire them when they are not needed. To me, the important considerations in today’s economy is job performance: speed and change. Loyalty is not a consideration.
Today there is a lot of competition and we need to hire workers who can perform a task well. We need to find skilled workers who can do a job without a lot of training. We need to match the job to the worker, and, if the job changes, we change the worker.
Because of this increased competition, we need to be able to produce our goods or services quickly. We need young people who are willing to put in long hours. We need young people who are aggressive and will push themselves to do their job faster.
In order to compete, we have to be innovative. By changing our workforce frequently, we can bring in new ideas. We must constantly be looking for new ways to do new things. We need fresh workers with fresh points of view.
Although a company’s loyalty to a worker and a workers loyalty to a company is a noble idea, it is not practical today. Skilled workers do not want to be tied down to one company; they want the flexibility to improve their opportunities. Change makes the economy powerful.
篇6：托福写作满分作文
72 You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
I’d rather have the university assign a roommate to share a room with me. As far as I’m concerned, this is part of the university experience. Students should meet new people and be open to new experiences. I like leaving this up to chance.
Actually, even though the university will choose, it’s not totally a matter of chance. We all filled out information sheets. The school knows what we’re majoring in, what our interests are, and our study habits and our goals. I think they’re probably very good at matching roommates using this information. They’ve had a lot of practice. Besides, if a mistake is made, I can change my room assignment next semester.
If I did want to choose my own roommate, I’d first pick some candidates from the list supplied by the university. Then I’d write to them and they’d write back. Through our letters, we’d find out if we shared common interests, such as sports or movies. More importantly, we’d find out if we like doing the same things in our free time. Because my investigation, I’d probably get someone compatible with me. It’s a lot of work to go through, though. Besides, the process of finding similar interests isn’t all that different from what the university does.
Trying to predict whom I’m going to get along with is not a science. I might choose someone who sounds just like me and still find that the two of us just don’t get along as roommates. Besides, I think it would be boring to room with somebody who’s just the same as me. I’d rather be with someone who has different interests and likes to do different things. Maybe I’d even get a roommate from another culture. After all, one of the reasons I’m going to the university is to be exposed to a lot of new experiences. So, I’d rather have the university choose my roommate for me.
73 Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I realize that it’s important to stay up to date with our technology. So much, like our space and defense programs, depends on it. I’ve also read that we shouldn’t let other governments get ahead of ours in the race for better technology. This could eventually put us at a disadvantage and our whole economy could suffer. Despite all this, I think our government should spend our tax dollars on more basic items before it gets into the business of developing computer technology.
We have so many problems in our society, and it seems every solution needs money. For instance, we talk about getting people off welfare. To do that we need money to give them jobs until they can support themselves. That means support training, day care for their children, and probably a monthly rent subsidy. All of those things can cost hundreds of millions of dollars. However, if we could solve a major problem like, wouldn’t it improve our society even more than new technology?
Another problem is that our transportation system is falling apart. Bridges have cracks in them. Highways buckle. Accidents happen because of these problems. We shouldn’t put money into improving a computer chip when we have basic needs like these.
Besides, Why should the government be in the business of developing technology? Aren’t there several very successful corporations doing just that? Yes, it’s probably less the expensive in the long run for the government to develop the technology. Nevertheless, in the short run, there are basic needs in our society that aren’t being met. I think that’s where the money should go.
篇7：托福写作满分作文
59 Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risk or chance. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nothing ventured. Nothing gained. If our great explorers and scientists did not live by this creed, where would we be? I think that we must all take risks in our lives, but these must be calculated risks. Like the great thinkers of our time, we must plan carefully, seize all opportunities, and reevaluate our plans.
There is no such thing as a chance occurrence. Columbus in his search for the Indies drew maps, plotted his route carefully, and set out. Madam Curie worked diligently in her laboratory recording every aspect of her experiments. You need to have a careful plan so you can measure your success.
Even with a careful plan, changes occur. Columbus was looking for the Indies, but ended up in the Caribbean. Lewis and Clark were looking for a river passage west, but discovered much more. You have to be ready to take advantage of new things as they occur.
When things go against plan, you must be ready to change direction. Columbus didn’t bring back spices from the East Indies, he brought back gold from the West Indies. It is important to see the positive side of things. Make your mistakes work for you.
You will never succeed in life if you don’t take chance. But before you start, you must plan carefully so you are ready to take advantage of every opportunity and turn mistakes to your advantage.
60 What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I think that people my age would like to have a place to go after school. They could go there to socialize, have meetings, and just relax.
In my town, there are a few tea houses, but these are reserved for our fathers and their friends. Teenagers do not go there unless it’s to carry message to their fathers. We need a place where we can meet after school to talk about school and other subjects that interest us.
At our own tea house, we could also have meetings. Those would be like club meetings. We could have a debating society, a poetry reading group, or a political club. We could meet after school one night a week and have our meetings.
We need a place where we could just relax away from our family. Our home life is very hectic; there are a lot of younger children making a lot of noise in the evening. We need a quiet place to study, read the paper, or just sit.
If our town had a tea house reserved for teenagers, it would be good for our parents since they would always know where we were. They would know that we were just socializing, or meeting, or just relaxing with our friends.
篇8：托福写作如何获取满分
托福写作如何获取满分?这3种写法技巧不可不会
托福写作满分写法技巧：举实例
思维短路，举实例!提出一个观点，举实例!提出一个方案，举实例!而且这也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型：
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
托福写作满分写法技巧：做比较
方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的;
世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语：
相似的比较：
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
托福写作满分写法技巧：换言之
没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章再多一些字，或者文绉绉地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我们举过的例子：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短语：
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
托福写作之结构性词汇介绍
英文写作和中文写作在行文习惯和逻辑上都有很大的差别，这一点之前在之前介绍如何解决指代不明的问题时就已经提到过了。整体上看，相比于中国(或者说东方)风格的婉转隐晦，美国人则更坚持简洁明了。那么从行文习惯上，这个特点有一个很常见的体现，那就是结构性词汇的使用。这里所说的结构性词汇是我自己起的名字，可能不同的人有不同的说法。这些词汇在文章当中的作用就是表明和构建框架，告诉读者每一部分的内容分别是什么。它们与逻辑关联词的最终目的相似，都是为了使文章看起来调理更加清晰、结构更加合理。
对于综合写作来说，各位老师通常为同学们提供的模板当中很多都是结构性词汇，最典型的就是序数词和类似序数词作用的一些表达。简单的有first，second，third，高级一些的有first of all，moreover，in addition等等。这些是用来分隔和标明综合写作的三段主体段，方便读者(即阅卷人)理解和寻找要点。另外很重要的一种结构性词汇就是“阅读文章提到”“听力部分认为”等等这类说明观点持有者身份的部分。有了这些我们才能明确下面我们所体现的内容到底是哪一份材料的观点，从而避免歧义。
对于独立写作，结构性词汇也有非常重要的作用。与综合写作相同的就是我们需要用到分隔并标明分论点的序数词。这些序数词或者类似功能的词汇出现，读者就能意识到后面一般会紧跟着一个主体段的分论点。除此之外，为了体现清晰的结构脉络，主体段内其他几个关键环节(比如“说理”和“论据”)也需要结构性词汇的引入。比如说理，即把主旨句当中的理由再表达得更清晰明确一些，所以引入说理环节的结构性词汇就可以是：
1. That is to say, ...
2. To be more specific, ...
3. In other words, ...
他们的意思也很简单，分别是“那就是说”“更具体地说”“换句话说”。而引入论据的方式就更简单了，for example/take sth.as an example等等都很常见。
关于结构性词汇的重要性，笔者也是在美国留学的过程中逐渐意识到的。因为在自己的essay甚至论文当中，导师和写作指导都曾或多或少强调了这些词汇的重要性。也就是说，一旦内容上进入了不同的部分或者环节，就应该用明确的标志物表明这种转换。当然文中提到的一些结构性词汇还是非常简单的几个，同学们可以询问老师或课后自行积累，以获得更多逼格更高更地道的表达。
托福写作：教你搞定“非主流”题型
每次一到考试，就“惊吓”的发现，独立写作种你复习的题型都巧妙的避开了所考题型!是不是很无语呢，尤其是当考试出现了【三选一与问题分析类】“非主流”题型，这类题型是近年来总是会突然袭击的考题，而且是很多童鞋都会忽略的题型!
今天，就带大家一起来GET【三选一与问题分析类】题型写作思路及技巧，分分钟教你拿下高分!
三选一与问题分析类题型
【三选一】作为托福独立写作中的一类常见题，通常会基于某个话题给出三个选项，让童鞋们挑选其中一个认为最好的进行展开讨论，例如：
Which way do you think is the best for a student to make friends?
Join a sports team，participate in community activities or travel?
每当托福考生遇到这样的题目，内心一定是崩溃的，一方面因为我们写惯了二选一比较级类型题，思路是比较模式化的，然而对于三选一题目准备并不充分，导致考场思路严重短路。
【问题分析类】是比较罕见的一类题型，但考试碰见这类题型，还是比较蒙圈的，通常是给出一个问题，让童鞋们分析论证。
如何搞定写作难题?
三选一与问题分析类题目作为独立写作偏议论文的文体，考生需要在一定时间内自圆其说地表明自己的立场，并给出相应的论证说理和事实举例。
三选一，到底选哪个?
对于有“纠结症”的童鞋，三选一写作就有些困难了，三个选项看起来都好有道理的样子，如何才能表明自己的立场呢?这时候，你就需要知道考官想要你选哪个，去“迎合”考官的口味!
题型结构和思路
那三选一与问题分析类题目的题型，与其他题型有哪些不同呢?在复习备考中，童鞋们需要提前熟悉和了解这类题型的结构、思路拓展与梳理!
托福写作思路解析：国外产品比国内好
新托福写作题目：国外产品比国内好
We should buy domestic products, even though they may be more expensive than commodities that produced in foreign counties.
新托福写作思路解析：国外产品比国内好
选国外：1.质量好，对消费者有好处—例如买手机，中国人买苹果和三星，苹果质量好，且好看，系统稳定，可以下载很对的APP，例如啥的啥的。对人的生活有哪些帮助啊。三星的摄像头好，屏幕高清，系统很稳定的。
2.买好的国外产品能够促进行业之间的竞争，国内产品生产商也会致力于提升自己的产品质量，既利于消费者，也有利于国内的经济发展。例如车最近几年国产车有了很大的提升，例如红旗，比亚迪渐渐的走入了很多人的家庭，因为他不断的完善自己的产品, 迎合消费者的需求。
托福写作思路解析：现代人不如从前友好
新托福写作题目：现代人不如从前友好
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The people in the past were friendlier than people today.
新托福写作思路解析：现代人不如从前友好
不同意：
1.
论点：科技发展疏远人们关系，因此，人们显然不如从前友好了。
解释：人们过度依赖电子产品，减少了人际活动的次数
例子：多例，吃饭的时候，人们玩手机的现象更多了。坐公交时候，更多的人玩手机而忽略帮助需要帮助的人。在学校的时候，人们通过微信邮件沟通的方式也变的更多，面对面沟通的频率也大大下降。
结论：现在社会上越来越多的人变的冷漠，很大部分归咎于科技发展
2.
论点：社会压力的增加使得人们有着更多负面情绪
解释：社会发展的必然趋势导致市民承受更多的压力，有意无意之间，人们内心就会积累着大量负面情绪。
例子：多例，一个软件工程师每天需要工作远超9小时，而且超负荷的脑力工作让他们变得精疲力尽，长时间的投入工作也使得他们承担过多压力。再例如证券公司的理财经理每天要分析大量数据更他们的客户带来收益的保障，这种枯燥的工作方式让他们会变的脾气更暴躁。结论：很明显，快节奏的生活以及工作方式是另外一个人们变的不像过去那么友好的因素。
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让步段：诚然，教育的提升使得人们变的比过去更加有文化。然而，教育水平的发展过度重视的是生产力的提升而忽视了素质教育。
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